Tuesday 19 May 2015

Treemendous makeover persuasive writing

We had a go at creating persuasive pieces of writing to convince others to help out at the huge school TREEMENDOUS makeover. Very convincing I think! Thanks Amber and Laura for sharing your efforts!



Dear Family


Do you want to feel that fulfilling sense of achievement? Do you want to help you child’s education and others in the future? Then we need you! Over the next 5 weekends you must help our Treemendous makeover come alive in a once in a lifetime opportunity. The process has been started but needs your help! Whether it’s for an hour in between those winter sports or the whole day, no matter how busy you are you can help!


Over Saturday and Sunday each weekend we will be planning, constructing and planting. But on Queens birthday you can have a relaxing break. Your hunger needs will be satisfied with morning/afternoon tea provided. This is a great experience for you to be part of in the community. Every time you walk past the treemendous site you can feel that you played a part in the spectacular transformation. Nobody minds how many weekends you come, you can even come to all of them! Planting Day will on the 6th of June and will be the conclusion of the Treemendous site.


We are looking forward to seeing you down at the “ditch” but soon no more. Thanks for your time. Just think about achieving the great accomplishment and feat. See you in the days of Treemendous construction.

Sincerely,
Laura and Amber


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